Wednesday, September 06, 2006

It rhymes

I want to be courted, be wooed;

Be charmed and pursued.

Dined with, danced with;

Found some romance with.

Honored and loved,

Cherished and thought of.

Pushed to inspire and impress,

I’m more than just undressed.



**I'll make it better someday.


5 comments:

super des said...

If you want to know why I wrote that, this should give you some idea.

Toastedsuzy said...

I love the last line. It's awesome!

So sweet to discover a naked girl is saying all of this.

Reminds me of my former lovers' tit-muffled declarations of undying admiration: "You're so brilliant, so talentubbblllmmm. *slurp slurp*"

lol

Or maybe that's just me.

TS

super des said...

That made me laugh really hard.

Thanks, I thought the last line was just a good rhyme, but it gives a whole new meaning to the poem.

Radio said...

Quit trying to make me look bad.

super des said...

This doesn't concern you. Plkus, I got people to read your blog, didn't I?

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